Travel and Leisure, Stories and Essays
Interesting story. I like it.But in my opinion you introduced the piece of glass too early. I believe the effect is better if you introduce it later.(A little bit in the style of Earnest Hemmingway, but maybe it's just me ;-))
Think so, too. However, I like it.
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Interesting story. I like it.
But in my opinion you introduced the piece of glass too early. I believe the effect is better if you introduce it later.
(A little bit in the style of Earnest Hemmingway, but maybe it's just me ;-))
Think so, too. However, I like it.
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